I am a Year 6 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Miss Hansell.
Monday, 26 September 2011
Friday, 23 September 2011
Describing Piri Weepu.
When I felt the wind run up my back I couldn't wait for the action of the game to start. When I sat down on my comfortable seat, I could feel the excitement tinkling in my stomach.
Then finally the Haka started. I could see Piri Weepu slapping his hands against his chest like a true Maori warrior.I could see his Maori patterned tattoos on his arm. I heard his strong and loud manly voice shouting out the starting of the haka . He was so frightening it was like I was being threatened to live or die by a warrior.It was so frightening.
But then when he got the blue rugby ball he ran through everyone as if their was no one there on the field. His black hair brushed back, then when he was that close to the try line then he dived down as if he was flying and scored a try. I was so amazed. After that, he ran back to all his team mates when he was running I could see his white rugby boots getting pushed up against the lushes grass. His team mates came towards him and patted his back in joy.
And that night I will never forget.
Then finally the Haka started. I could see Piri Weepu slapping his hands against his chest like a true Maori warrior.I could see his Maori patterned tattoos on his arm. I heard his strong and loud manly voice shouting out the starting of the haka . He was so frightening it was like I was being threatened to live or die by a warrior.It was so frightening.
But then when he got the blue rugby ball he ran through everyone as if their was no one there on the field. His black hair brushed back, then when he was that close to the try line then he dived down as if he was flying and scored a try. I was so amazed. After that, he ran back to all his team mates when he was running I could see his white rugby boots getting pushed up against the lushes grass. His team mates came towards him and patted his back in joy.
And that night I will never forget.
Tuesday, 16 August 2011
Monday, 15 August 2011
Friday, 15 July 2011
Orange Pear Apple Bear Book Review
WALT-write a book review to respond to a text by Emily Gravett.
Context:
.The tittle in this book is Apple,Pear,Orange,Bear.
.The Authors and Illustrators name is Emily Gravett
.This book is a Picture Book
Text Description:
.The main Characters in this story’s names are Apple,Pear,Orange,Bear.
.In this story their is a Apple,Pear and Orange Bear
.This story took place in the wide open space out in the open.
.In this story their is no problem or solution.
Judgement:
.This book is a very good book because it has a good rhythm, it rhymes and has very eye catching pictures.
.I would recommend this book to people that are finding rhyming story’s.
.I think this book has very good writing and I liked it how she uses angles to her writing.
Context:
.The tittle in this book is Apple,Pear,Orange,Bear.
.The Authors and Illustrators name is Emily Gravett
.This book is a Picture Book
Text Description:
.The main Characters in this story’s names are Apple,Pear,Orange,Bear.
.In this story their is a Apple,Pear and Orange Bear
.This story took place in the wide open space out in the open.
.In this story their is no problem or solution.
Judgement:
.This book is a very good book because it has a good rhythm, it rhymes and has very eye catching pictures.
.I would recommend this book to people that are finding rhyming story’s.
.I think this book has very good writing and I liked it how she uses angles to her writing.
Author Study Role Play - Monkey and Me by Emily Gravett
This week we studied Emily Gravett. She is an author from Brighton. Did you know she used to live on a bus? Emily Gravett writes and illustrates her own stories. Here is a movie of my reading group presenting a role play of Monkey and Me. I hope you like it!
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